replace the door to the bunk with a slider.
Everything heavy is on the roadside of the rig… needs to be balanced out a bit.
Work on your line weights. You should be using darkness of lines to show depth and also importance in your drawing. Also lettering is important in hand drafting. Try using all capital letters.
Dimensions should be in more organized strings. Is it 29’ overall or 29’ plus the bumper. I would have dimensioned it with 3 strings. One showing bumper to hitch, then one showing bumper size, cabin size, then hitch size. The a third on that shows locations of critical items like windows and walls. If it’s just supposed to be a design piece I would have just done over all and cabin and left off window sizes too.
Over all it a clean drawing and I’ve kinda nerded out on it Because I done get to deal with drawing much any more. As you move into CAD everything get faster and it becomes more important to consider how your drawing will be used. So you’ll produce multiple drawings showing specifics things. The guy doing the framing won’t care about furniture size so you’d leave that off. He only cares about the TV because he need to put in blocking so you add that in as a detail.
Glad you got to play with a fun design. My classes were always given the same house to draw
ohno:
Tough crowd here.
Don’t forget space on the hitch for batteries. The sofa and table configuration don’t appear to have enough room for peoples legs. Be thoughtful on how you use electronics and where stuff will need to be plugged in for charging (Battery or shore power). You also can not have enough storage. Looks like a fantastic start!
Slider to the bedroom will give you back 8″ in length. I would loose the pantry for kitchen counter space… you don’t loose a ton since it would have upper/lower cabinets. Would also give you an option to move the sink to an outside wall / window Otherwise, kinda cool, I love the slideless floorplan.. then again, I wonder if the bed was flipped 90 degree with a small 18″ deep bedroom slider. That may gain another foot from the length.
Didn’t know how many people call slide outs sliders.
Source: I was allowed to cook up an RV for my drafting class. What do y’all think?
